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My future job and profession

My future job and profession Bwy26
Everyone will have a profession in the future. I, too, have already chosen my future profession. It is profession to be a doctor. I took this profession from a young age because I was interested in this field ie medicine. To become a doctor, I must first get excellent grades in all subjects and study chemistry and biology in depth. When I become a doctor, I have to work hard and improve my knowledge. Only then will I become a real doctor in the future. Now, as with everyone, I have the question of what qualities I need to have to take up this profession. But after some research I found the answer to this question as well. The owner of this profession must be a kind, polite, qualifield doctor of his profession, as well as a brave heart. Having these quatities in me, in the future I will definitely become a leading doctor of my profession.
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IELTS essay My future job and profession

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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