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Write a paragraph about a job that you want to do in the future.

Write a paragraph about a job that you want to do in the future. B76gd

when I was in high school, I have thought a lot about what job I should do in the future. At first, I decided i would be an accountant like my dad but till 12 grade i end up choosing to study in marketing field. Marketing is a large majors with tons of position to work so at the moment i have no idea which part should i focus. i do read some news and i have found out that chief marketing officer (CMO) is a super cool position that i want to be even though the way to get to that will be very extreme and not everyone could do. i want to be a marketer because my 12-grade-mind thinks marketing maybe is a interesting field due to its name. i am learning marketing so i definitely will work in marketing department in some certain companies or institutions. i will be responsible for creating content on media platform, branding and advertising products. when i have done my assigned work i will report it to my boss. a

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thought
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 is a large Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "major"?major
majors
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 have no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
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some
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thinks
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marketing
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 am learning If 'learning' is used as a verb, it usually requires the infinitive: "to market".to market
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so
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when
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 have done my assigned work Did you mean "I"?I
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