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1. What things do you like about this Class? We will keep those teaching methods for future students.

1. What things do you like about this Class? We will keep those teaching methods for future students. xalOw
I like the fact that the class is flexible, meaning the teaching method is not like traditional method where teachers scold students if they do not finish their work. This can also be taken to mean that the teacher is easy-going as if I were his brother. This makes my learning procress a lot happier than any other classes and what’s more, it was such a good strategy to make us work on the presentation. Making presentation is like analysisng all of the stuff you learned and it makes you more confident. Your compliments on the students’ work are pretty satisfying too.
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is flexible, meaning the teaching method is not like traditional method where teachers scold students if they do not finish their work. This can
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a lot happier than any other classes and what’s more, it was such a
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good
strategy to
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us work on the presentation. Making presentation is like
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you more confident. Your compliments on the students’ work are pretty satisfying too.
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IELTS essay 1. What things do you like about this Class? We will keep those teaching methods for future students.

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