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Shopping habit is depended on the age group rather than else something.what extend do agree or disagree.

Shopping habit is depended on the age group rather than else something. what extend do agree or disagree. 30NLn

It is general acknowledged that in the cutting edge era, some individuals assume that shopping patterns are rely on the age group but others believe that there are numerous other factors behind this notion in which shoping habits do not depend on age group. I will discuss some prospects in the upcoming fragments. Commencing with reasons, why purchasing habits do not depend on age. The conspicuous view is social economic level. If individuals have enough money to buy anything, then they bought expensive brands. Poor person do not afford costly products because their economic level is weak. Thus, high finical background is most important. For example, In Nagaland, majority of people belongs to high class family, so they prefer bands everything as well as they are like to shopping. Probing further, personality and interest is also matter. Some person wants to show their reputation in the front of society, so they purchase attractive clothes. Nextly, gender difference is also matter. Males prefer brighter colour and females prefer both colours. Thus, gender difference play cruical role. For example, in the contemporary era, most of people purshase clothes for showing their money as well as personality, so they buy attractive clothes. In Conclusion, there are several factors in which shoping habit do not rely on age such as personality and interest.

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some
 individuals assume that shopping patterns are Consider using a past participle here: "relied".relied
rely
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but
 others believe that there are numerous other factors behind this notion in which Possible spelling mistake found.hopingshoppingshowingshapingslopingshoving
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 habits do not depend on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 group. I will discuss This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 prospects in the upcoming fragments.

Commencing with reasons, why purchasing habits do not depend on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
. The conspicuous view is social economic level. If individuals have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 anything, then they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 expensive brands. Poor person do not afford costly products This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 their economic level is weak. Thus
, high finical background is most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. For example
, In Nagaland, It seems that an article is missing.the majority of
majority of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 belongs to high This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they prefer bands everything as well
 as they are like to shopping.

Probing further
, personality and interest is also
 matter. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 person wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 their reputation in the front of society, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 attractive clothes. Possible spelling mistake found.Neatly
Nextly
, gender difference is also
 matter. Males prefer brighter Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 and females prefer both Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
. Thus
, gender difference play Possible spelling mistake found.crucial
cruical
 role. For example
, in the contemporary era, most of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Possible spelling mistake found.purchase
purshase
 clothes for showing their money as well
 as personality, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 attractive clothes.

In Conclusion
, there are several factors in which Possible spelling mistake found.hopingshoppingshowingshapingslopingshoving
shoping
 habit do not rely on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 such as personality and interest. 