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write a paragraph about 120-150 words about benefits of city life

write a paragraph about 120-150 words about benefits of city life Q5P5b

benefits of city life have been hotly discussed topic. First of all, students in the city will have good education. It cannot be dennied that in the city have many qualified teachers so students can broaden the knowledges easily. More interestingly in urrban hass many national schools; therefore, students can simple communicate with foreign teachers to improve their English. Indeed in city, students will have good educational conditions. Second of all, people may have good treatments. The fact is that, in city will have many famous hospital with modern equipments. Last but not least, public of transports in city is very convienient. Therefore you can take buses, trains anytime, anywhere

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benefits
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First of all
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students
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good
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dennied
 that in the city have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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students
 can broaden the Possible spelling mistake found.knowledgeknow ledges
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many
 national schools; therefore
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students
 can simple communicate with foreign teachers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
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Indeed
 in city, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 will have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 educational conditions. Second of all, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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good
 treatments. The fact is that, in city will have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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famous
 hospital with modern equipments. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, public of transports in city is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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convienient
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 you can take buses, trains anytime, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphanywhere.anywhere!anywhere?anywhere:anywhere,anywhere;
anywhere