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Last week, i take part in an international writing competition. It is so hard tp write but i was very delight. I want to take part in this competition because this is popular competition for students to expand the future business. Also, i think i write very good. But i always try to practise writing to prepare for the competition. I also attend to observer to surroundings to write more realistically. And i learn a lot of from my teachers and friends. To join this this competition you access to fanpage and there is a link to sign op. Good luck with the exam.
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in an international writing
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learn
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join
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fanpage
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Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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