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Write a narrative paragraph about 150-180 words. Tell about something that happened to you during a trip. Use details to help your readers understand what you experienced and how you felt.

Write a narrative paragraph about 150-180 words. Tell about something that happened to you during a trip. Use details to help your readers understand what you experienced and how you felt. q1pAD
During daily life, each people have their own experiences which are unforgetable. In my opinon, the most unforgetable experience is a trouble during my vacation in Da Lat city - I forgot my wallet in a taxi but I meraculously found it. It was 2 years ago, when I was having a holiday on The City of Flowers - DaLat, I had a date with my friends and we went to the Market by taxi. When we had arrived at the Market, I was going to buy some food then I realize that I had forgotten my wallet on the taxi. I worried a lot, me and my friends, we were not remember the license plates or even the name of the taxi company, because we just randomly caught that car on the street. The only thing could help us realize that car was the driver's face. But I was really lucky, on the way we back to the hotel, the driver realize us, he offer us another time but he was not know that we were looking for him. I told him about my wallet then found it on the floor board of the car. That experience was unforgetable because the more disappointment and sadness when I thought I lost the wallet, the more happiness when I found it. And I learned a lesson after the story that is always keep an eye on the important thing like handphone or wallet when hanging out.
During daily life, each
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unforgetable
. In my
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opinon
, the most
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unforgetable
experience is a trouble during my vacation in
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Da
Lat city
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I forgot my
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wallet
in a
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taxi
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but
I
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meraculously
found it. It was 2 years ago, when I was having a holiday on The City of Flowers
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-
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DaLat
, I had a date with my
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friends and
we went to the Market by
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taxi
. When we had arrived at the Market, I was going to
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buy
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some
food then I realize that I had forgotten my
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wallet
on the
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taxi
. I worried a lot, me and my friends, we were not
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remember
the license plates or even the name of the
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taxi
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company
,
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because
we
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just
randomly
caught that car on the street. The
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only
thing could
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help
us realize that car was the driver's face.
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But
I was
really
lucky, on the way we back to the hotel, the driver realize us, he
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offer
us another time
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but
he was not know that we were looking for him. I
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told
him about my
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wallet
then found it on the floor board of the car. That experience was
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unforgetable
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because
the more disappointment and sadness when I
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thought
I lost the
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wallet
, the more happiness when I found it. And I learned a lesson after the story
that is
always
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keep
an eye on the
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important
thing like
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handphone
or
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wallet
when hanging out.
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IELTS essay Write a narrative paragraph about 150-180 words. Tell about something that happened to you during a trip. Use details to help your readers understand what you experienced and how you felt.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
245 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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