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Countrise ,the number of animals and plants is decling why do you think this is happening how can this issue be solved?

Countrise, the number of animals and plants is decling why do you think this is happening how can this issue be solved? nxmA2
Flora and fauna play crucial role in our life. nowadays, plants and animal reduce day by day in many nations. ensuing essay will discuss the reasons and solutions how to solved it in detail. Discussing with the ample number of rationales why animals and plants decline. on the top of that is masses are selfish because they cut the plants for their own purpose and build industries, factories on that place. people use furniture which make from trees. What is more, deforestation, indviduals cut the forest where animals live. for instance, forest is a home of the animals which people do reduce for their own benefits. eventually, if plants and animals are reduce from the earth. it means people will do reduce their life because cannot survive without plants. On the other hand, there are many solutions which can keep flora and fauna safe. To begin with the government impose laws, to eleborate it. Government should make rules regarding deforestation. Authority ought to keep fine or pnishment if masses do cut forests and hunting the livestock. Last but not least, when individuals have to do cut the plants then they should planted more trees. For example, if floks cut 10 trees then they should planted 20 trees. Therefore, they keep their nature safe. To recapulated, deforestation and hunting are responsible for decreasing the plants and livestocks. In my opinion, this problem could be tacked if government implement the strict laws.
Flora and fauna play crucial role in our life.
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nowadays
,
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plants
and
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animal
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reduce
day by day in
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many
nations.
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ensuing
essay will discuss the reasons and solutions how to solved it in detail. Discussing with the ample number of rationales why
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animals
and
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plants
decline.
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on
the top of
that is
masses are selfish
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because
they
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cut
the
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plants
for their
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own
purpose and build industries, factories on that place.
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people
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use
furniture which
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make
from
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trees
.
What is more
, deforestation,
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indviduals
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cut
the forest where
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animals
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live
.
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for
instance, forest is a home of the
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animals
which
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people
do
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reduce
for their
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own
benefits.
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eventually
, if
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plants
and
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animals
are
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reduce
from the earth.
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it
means
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people
will do
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reduce
their life
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because
cannot survive without
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plants
.
On the other hand
, there are
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many
solutions which can
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keep
flora and fauna safe. To
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begin
with the
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government
impose laws, to
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eleborate
it.
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should
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make
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rules
regarding deforestation. Authority ought to
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keep
fine or
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pnishment
if masses do
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cut
forests and hunting the livestock. Last
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but
not least, when individuals
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have to
do
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the
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plants
then they should
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planted
more
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trees
.
For example
, if
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floks
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cut
10
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trees
then they should
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planted
20
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trees
.
Therefore
, they
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keep
their nature safe. To
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recapulated
, deforestation and hunting are responsible for decreasing the
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plants
and
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livestocks
. In my opinion, this problem could
be tacked
if
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government
implement the strict laws.
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IELTS essay Countrise, the number of animals and plants is decling why do you think this is happening how can this issue be solved?

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