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Write a mail to your manager, explaining the situation with valid reasons, and share the timeline within which you’ll share the documents with the client.

Write a mail to your manager, explaining the situation with valid reasons, and share the timeline within which you’ll share the documents with the client. E9KDb
To: MyManager@company. com Sub: SOPs update || Sent for offshore rework Hi (Manager’s Name), This is with regard to the call we had yesterday with the client on SOPs rework. My sincere apology for the delay in reporting the client on time. As I was working on another report (JE posting) to be completed for the other client as part of year end activity and which is very critical, I prioritize JE posting activity to be completed first and thought of completing SOP rework by end of the day. However, JE postings took extra hours to complete, I couldn’t able to make it yesterday. I will complete the SOP rework by 1AM today and submit for your review. Please let me know if you have any other concern. Thank you. Regards Freddie (Company Name) Finance Analyst > Accounting
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Sub:
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SOPs
update ||
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Sent
for offshore rework

Hi (Manager’s Name),

This is with regard to the call we had yesterday with the client on
Possible spelling mistake found.
SOPs
rework.

My sincere apology for the delay in reporting the client on time.

As I was working on another report (JE posting) to
be completed
for the other client as part of year
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end
activity and which is
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very
critical, I prioritize JE posting activity to
be completed
first
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
of completing SOP rework by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the day.
However
, JE postings took extra hours to complete, I couldn’t able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it yesterday.

I will complete the SOP rework by 1AM
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
and submit for your review.

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Please
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let
me know if you have any other concern.

Thank you.

Regards

Freddie

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Company
Name)

Finance Analyst > Accounting
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IELTS essay Write a mail to your manager, explaining the situation with valid reasons, and share the timeline within which you’ll share the documents with the client.

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137 words
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