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Describe an item of clothing that someone gave you

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I would like to describe a leather jacket my father gave me as a present on my 20 birthday. I must say that it is really smart and exactly to my liking. The jacket is made of leather only and by IVY – a Vienamese clothes brand. It is black biker jacket, which was in fashion at that time. It is a high quality leather jacket, which feel smooth to the touch without imperfections. The leather itself is windproof and can be lined for additional warmth. What i like most is that there are two deep side pockets. So in the winter, i always put my hands into those pockets to avoid the cold. The jacket fits me perfectly and makes me feel comfortable and warm, no matter how cold the weather is. I keep my self warm by wearing it with blue jeans and Dr. Matents boots, which match it very well. In fact, i have never thought whether it will be out of fashion. As this coat is a gift from my father, i treasure it a lot and for sure, i will keeping wearing it in the future.
I would like to
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leather
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jacket
my father gave me as a present on my 20 birthday. I
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say that it is
really
smart and exactly to my liking.

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jacket
is made
of
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leather
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only
and by IVY
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Vienamese
clothes brand. It is black biker
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jacket
, which was in fashion at that time. It is a high quality
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leather
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jacket
, which feel smooth to the touch without imperfections. The
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leather
itself is windproof and can
be lined
for additional warmth.

What
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i
like most is that there are two deep side pockets.
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So
in the winter,
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i
always put my hands into those pockets to avoid the
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cold
. The
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jacket
fits me
perfectly
and
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makes
me feel comfortable and warm, no matter how
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cold
the weather is.

I
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keep
my self warm by wearing it with blue jeans and Dr.
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Matents
boots, which match it
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very
well.

In fact,
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i
have never
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thought
whether it will be out of fashion.

As this coat is a gift from my father,
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i
treasure it a lot and for sure,
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will
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keeping
wearing it in the future.
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IELTS essay Describe an item of clothing that someone gave you

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
191 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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