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Write a four-paragraph article (at least 80 words) about your best friend

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When we study at school, having some friends is really necessary for our life and till now, I met lots of kind friends but thought that having one is enough, my bestie's name is Amy. I had met her when we had summer school (2019-2020) and we were in the same class. At first, we just ignored each other, I even didn't know her name, and vice versa. But then, I got to know her because she met my friend and we talked to each other a lot. As a result, she became my best friend.

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IELTS essay Write a four-paragraph article (at least 80 words) about your best friend

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

96 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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