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Write a four-paragraph article (at least 80 words) about your best friend

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When we study at school, having some friends is really necessary for our life and till now, I met lots of kind friends but thought that having one is enough, my bestie's name is Amy. I had met her when we had summer school (2019-2020) and we were in the same class. At first, we just ignored each other, I even didn't know her name, and vice versa. But then, I got to know her because she met my friend and we talked to each other a lot. As a result, she became my best friend.
When we study at school, having
some
friends
is
really
necessary for our life and till
now
, I met lots of kind
friends
but
thought
that having one is
enough
, my bestie's name is Amy. I had met her when we had summer school (2019-2020) and we were in the same
class
. At
first
, we
just
ignored
each other, I even didn't know her name, and vice versa.
But
then, I
got
to know her
because
she met my
friend and
we talked to each other a lot.
As a result
, she became my best
friend
.
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IELTS essay Write a four-paragraph article (at least 80 words) about your best friend

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