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Aliens similar to humans

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Aliens have similar aspects to humans. These include hand-foot, head, eye, skin color, etc. They have a condition to maintain their vital function, just like humans. For example: Social life, eating and drinking, personal care and starting a family, etc. Aliens are more sensitive, optimistic and emotional than humans in the face of certain events and situations. We will never see an alien who fights for his own generation's own interests or knowingly harms his own kind.
Aliens have similar aspects to humans. These include hand-foot, head, eye, skin color, etc. They have a condition to maintain their vital function,
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IELTS essay Aliens similar to humans

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