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I live in nuclear family. we are four members of my family. My dad, my mom, bro and me. I like my family. They are all my heart. My family are one of the most amazing people's. They are always loving and caring of my brother and me. Daddy is head of my family. My father is very kind and hardworking person. Dad is my super hero. Since my papa is my inspiration. He takes me fills my life with happiness and joys. My mom is preety lady. Because she is my whole world. My mumma is homemaker and it's a very caring too. She takes great care of the house and cooks yummy food for all of us. Sometimes she brings beautiful gifts for me. I love and respect are very much too. I also have a brother. He is very naughty boy in my family. My bro is cares for me and love me a lot. We play to much with together. Sometimes he gets angry at me. But after ontime he say sorry to me. I cannot imagine my life without my family. They always will be for me.
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kind and hardworking person. Dad is my super hero.
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IELTS essay Write a essay about your family members

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
192 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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