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Describe a process of showing how to do, make, fix or use something.

Describe a process of showing how to do, make, fix or use something. Dw7KA
How to make Gato cake cream with common whipping cream is very simple, fast and neat? The following method is very suitable for people who have just got the kitchen. Firstly, we prepared all the ingredients such as whipping cream, sugar, a large bowl, vanilla. Then put the fresh cream in the prepared stainless steel bowl, add sugar to the cream to suit your taste and add vanilla to make more delicious. Finally, use a mixer to beat the eggs at medium speed, in a circle from the inside to the out side and increase the speed of whisk and stop as soon as the cream is smooth.
How to
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make
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Gato
cake
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cream
with common whipping
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cream
is
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very
simple,
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fast
and neat? The following method is
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very
suitable for
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people
who have
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just
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got
the kitchen.
Firstly
, we prepared all the ingredients such as whipping
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cream
, sugar, a large bowl, vanilla. Then put the fresh
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cream
in the prepared stainless steel bowl,
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add
sugar to the
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cream
to suit your taste and
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add
vanilla to
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make
more delicious.
Finally
,
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use
a mixer to beat the eggs at medium speed, in a circle from the inside to the
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out side
and increase the speed of whisk and
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stop
as
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soon
as the
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cream
is smooth.
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IELTS essay Describe a process of showing how to do, make, fix or use something.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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