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Write a descriptive paragraph about one technological item which is the most useful for your life.

Write a descriptive paragraph about one technological item which is the most useful for your life. o5eOw
Nowadays laptops provided us with a plethora of new options, made our lives more pleasant, and saved us time. Being a sophomore, I find the laptop is the most useful device which helps me in many areas of my work, study and life. My laptop is black with the Sony Vaio logo on it. My sister has been using it for almost ten years. She gave it to me when I was in college. It looks older than other laptops, but I adore it. My sister did exceptionally well in her studies, getting several high marks with it so I consider myself fortunate to have it. It can complete more than one task in a short time and do the work of many human beings alone within less time. Especially, in the context of social distancing, I can study and discuss the assignment with teachers and friends on the laptop. It has high processing speed, large storage space, fast memory, and an excellent display screen compared to a PC desktop. I use a laptop every day whether it's surfing the net or working on my final project. My laptop also helps me study English more successfully by providing access to websites such as BBC Learning English, Exam English, Busuu. Besides, it helps me look up information when I have the essays from electronic information sources, digital libraries. In the context of Covid 19, laptop is becoming more and more important to me in life today, whether I use it for school or work purposes, or just for entertainment.
Nowadays
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laptops
provided us with a plethora of new options, made our
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lives
more pleasant, and saved us time. Being a sophomore, I find the
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laptop
is the most useful device which
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helps
me in
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many
areas of my work,
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study
and life. My
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laptop
is black with the Sony
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Vaio
logo on it. My sister has been using it for almost ten years. She gave it to me when I was in college. It looks older than other
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laptops
,
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but
I adore it. My sister did
exceptionally
well in her
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studies
, getting several high marks with it
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so
I consider myself fortunate to have it. It can complete more than one task in a short time and do the work of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
human beings alone within less time.
Especially
, in the context of social distancing, I can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
and discuss the assignment with teachers and friends on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
. It has high processing speed, large storage space,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
memory, and an excellent display screen compared to a PC desktop. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a
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laptop
every day whether it's surfing the net or working on my final project. My
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laptop
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me
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study
English more
successfully
by providing access to websites such as BBC Learning English, Exam English,
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Busuu
.
Besides
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me look up information when I have the essays from electronic information sources, digital libraries. In the context of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
,
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laptop
is becoming more and more
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important
to me in life
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today
, whether I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it for school or work purposes, or
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just
for entertainment.
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IELTS essay Write a descriptive paragraph about one technological item which is the most useful for your life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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