Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Briefly state the reasons you are interested in studying business administration.

Briefly state the reasons you are interested in studying business administration. m8nyr

Business can be counted as part of my family, and the members of my family run various kinds of business. Since childhood, I have always gained knowledge and interest about it. I think studying about business administration is very fascinating because it is intimate and can be applied in everyday life. Not only for business but also for time management. Moreover, learning this subject is limitless studying and has no fixed curriculum. It allowed we to find new knowledge all the time because It always change according to the world situation, world society, and environment which make me eager to learn things all the time, not standing still. Furthermore, in the future, I would like to have my own business, and I think that studying in this faculty can enhance my knowledge and interest in many ways and it is very beneficial to me and my future business.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
Business
 can be counted
 as part of my family, and the members of my family run various kinds of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. Since childhood, I have always gained knowledge and interest about it. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 studying about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 administration is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 fascinating This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is intimate and can be applied
 in everyday life. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for time management. Moreover
, learning this subject is limitless studying and has no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 curriculum. It This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 we to find new knowledge all the time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 It always Did you mean "changes"?changes
change
 according to the world situation, world society, and environment which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me eager to learn things all the time, not standing still
.

Furthermore
, in the future, I would like to have my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
, and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that studying in this faculty can enhance my knowledge and interest in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways and it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial to me and my future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. 