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Write a description of the place where you live

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I am living in Long Xuyen city, An Giang province. It is located in the south of Vietnam. I have been living here since i was born. This place has many unforgettable memories to me. This city is not large and quite small, it just needs to spend half of day to go to all main parts of the city. It may be small, but there still have everything that people need. There are shopping stores, bowling alley, karaoke, restaurant, hospital, . . . enough for everyone's daily life from education to entertainment. The night life out here are quite lively and crowded, mostly on some sort of events like Tet eve, Chritmas, . . . Compare to the past, Long Xuyen's been more and more crowded, which is in the good way. More building has been set up, more place to have fun, it's been more lively than ever. I love how my city turn into today and i how lucky that i was able to see it develop. i really proud to say that i am a part of this hometown.
I am living in Long
Xuyen
city, An
Giang
province. It
is located
in the south of Vietnam. I have been living here since
i
was born
. This place has
many
unforgettable memories to me. This city is not large and quite
small
, it
just
needs to spend half of day to go to all main parts of the city. It may be
small
,
but
there
still
have everything that
people
need. There are shopping stores, bowling alley, karaoke, restaurant, hospital
, .
.
.
enough
for everyone's daily life from education to entertainment. The
night life
out here are quite lively and crowded,
mostly
on
some
sort of
events
like Tet eve,
Chritmas
, .
.
.
Compare to the past, Long
Xuyen
's been more and more crowded, which is in the
good
way. More building has
been set
up, more place to have fun, it's been more lively than ever. I
love
how my city turn into
today
and i how lucky that
i
was able to
see
it develop.
i
really
proud to say that
i
am a part of this hometown.
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IELTS essay Write a description of the place where you live

Essay
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1 paragraphs
183 words
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