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Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say– When did you use the service? – What was wrong with the service provided? – What actions for improvement do you suggest? v.1

Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say– When did you use the service? – What was wrong with the service provided? – What actions for improvement do you suggest? v. 1
Government should spend money on railways more than roads. I agree that government budget should spend on trains and railway development more than spend money on roads because trains are environment friendly transport more than cars and railways can solve the traffic problem. Investment in railway systems can improve the quality of public transportation. If the country has the effective railway systems, people will use trains more than private cars. Decreasing a number of car usage can reduce air pollution from cars. People have a good life when they stay in a good environment. For example, Singapore is a country which has the effective railways around the city, this country has a lot of train stations. The private car is not necessary for people, so air pollution from cars is not a problem in Singapore. It is a good environment for living. At the same time, when people choose to travel to work by a train, people will use the private cars lower. This is solving the traffic problem, and commuters also use less time to travel to work by public transport when they do not have a problem with traffic jam. MRT and BTS are railway systems in Bangkok, for instance, people from residential areas can go to the city centre in one hour by a train while it uses more than two hours if travel by a car on the same route. In conclusion, government should invest in railway systems rather than roads, because railways give the benefit to the community by reduce pollutions and solve the traffic problem.
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should spend money on
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railways
more than roads. I
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agree
that
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government
budget should spend on
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trains
and
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railway
development more than spend money on roads
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because
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trains
are environment friendly transport more than
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cars
and
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railways
can solve the
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traffic
problem.

Investment in
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railway
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systems
can
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improve
the quality of public transportation. If the country has the effective
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railway
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systems
,
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people
will
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use
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trains
more than private
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cars
. Decreasing a number of
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car
usage can
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reduce
air pollution from
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cars
.
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People
have a
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good
life when they stay in a
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good
environment.
For example
, Singapore is a country which has the effective
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railways
around the city, this country has
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a lot of
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train
stations. The private
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car
is not necessary for
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people
,
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so
air pollution from
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cars
is not a
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problem
in Singapore. It is a
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good
environment for living.

At the same time, when
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people
choose to travel to work by a
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train
,
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people
will
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use
the private
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cars
lower. This is solving the
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traffic
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problem
, and commuters
also
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use
less time to travel to work by public transport when they do not have a
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problem
with
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traffic
jam. MRT and BTS are
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railway
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systems
in Bangkok,
for instance
,
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people
from residential areas can go to the city
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centre
in one hour by a
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train
while it
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uses
more than two hours if travel by a
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car
on the same route.

In conclusion
,
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government
should invest in
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railway
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systems
rather
than roads,
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because
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railways
give the benefit to the community by
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reduce
pollutions and solve the
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traffic
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problem
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say– When did you use the service? – What was wrong with the service provided? – What actions for improvement do you suggest? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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