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The diagrams below show information about the number of UK university students and the government spending on each university studentSummaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The diagrams below show information about the number of UK university students and the government spending on each university student
It is thought by some people that teaching handwriting skills to children is important. While I agree, handwriting plays a fundamental role in one's life, it is getting substituted by other available methods to write with more clarity and storage life. Firstly, Handwriting portrays the character of a person. It reveals one's way of living and thinking, which helps others to understand them more precisely. Secondly, even in today's world, it is impossible to live without writing with their own hands, and if not written properly can lead to a serious problem. For instance, still all schools in world conduct exams in writing and if children couldn't write clearly, it will directly affect their grades and performance, which is the reason they are taught different ways of writing that will eventually help them in their future. Another factor that should be taken into account is many languages have gone extinct just because people not longer write those languages with their hands or their is no teaching available on writing skills in those languages. On the other hand, computers and modern digital devices have reduced our burden of writing with hands, each time it is needed for learning, teaching, storing or any other purpose. Even in many schools and college, management authorities have diverted their exams, instead of writing with a pen or a pencil, to keyboards and monitor screens. Such approach is even beneficial for our environment, as it has cut down the usage of papers and pencils, which further has reduced the cutting of trees; thus saving our ecosystem and leading us to no longer need to teach handwriting skills to children. In my opinion, although, children could be taught styles and skills of writing by hand as it will directly help to preserve the currently used languages, other means of writing are available which are more efficient and effective.
It is
thought
by
some
people
that teaching
handwriting
skills
to children is
important
. While I
agree
,
handwriting
plays a fundamental role in one's life, it is getting substituted by
other
available methods to write with more clarity and storage life.

Firstly
,
Handwriting
portrays the character of a person. It reveals one's way of living and thinking, which
helps
others to understand them more
precisely
.
Secondly
, even in
today
's world, it is impossible to
live
without
writing
with their
own
hands
, and if not written
properly
can lead to a serious problem.
For instance
,
still
all schools in world conduct exams in
writing
and if children couldn't write
clearly
, it will
directly
affect their grades and performance, which is the reason they
are taught
different
ways of
writing
that will
eventually
help
them in their future. Another factor that should
be taken
into account is
many
languages have gone extinct
just
because
people
not longer write those languages with their
hands
or
their
is no teaching available on
writing
skills
in those languages.

On the
other
hand
, computers and modern digital devices have
reduced
our burden of
writing
with
hands
, each time it
is needed
for learning, teaching, storing or any
other
purpose. Even in
many
schools and college, management authorities have diverted their exams,
instead
of
writing
with a pen or a pencil, to keyboards and monitor screens. Such approach is even beneficial for our environment, as it has
cut
down the usage of papers and pencils, which
further
has
reduced
the cutting of trees;
thus
saving our ecosystem and leading us to no longer need to teach
handwriting
skills
to children.

In my opinion, although, children could
be taught
styles and
skills
of
writing
by
hand
as it will
directly
help
to preserve the
currently
used
languages,
other
means of
writing
are available which are more efficient and effective.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The diagrams below show information about the number of UK university students and the government spending on each university student

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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