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I'll never forget the time that I suddenly heard kinds of strange voices from my garage near to my house basement. While I had been trying to find out the source of the voice, I decided to ignore it and consider it as a stupid illusion. Afterwards the sound had repeated. The other thing you have you know is Up until then I had a doubt about genie presence in my house but the moment, I accepted this reality. Until that moment I hadn’t been able to sit behind my laptop and continued my work so I had stopped and decided to go to my room and sleep. To make a story short, as soon as I moved up at the stairs, a black cat had jumped out and I have realized the source of strange sounds. What a relief!
I'll never forget the time that I
suddenly
heard kinds of strange voices from my garage near to my
house
basement. While I had been trying to find out the source of the voice, I decided to
ignore
it and consider it as a stupid illusion. Afterwards the sound had repeated. The other thing you have you know is Up until then I had a doubt about genie presence in my
house
but
the moment, I
accepted
this reality. Until that moment I hadn’t been able to sit behind my laptop and continued my work
so
I had
stopped
and decided to go to my room and sleep. To
make
a story short, as
soon
as I
moved
up at the stairs, a black cat had jumped out and I have realized the source of strange sounds. What a relief!
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IELTS essay Write a brief about your anecdote

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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