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Up to now, humans still stand for the Covid-19 pandemic that is the most serious issue all over the world.

Up to now, humans still stand for the Covid-19 pandemic that is the most serious issue all over the world. GJn72
Up to now, humans still stand for the Covid-19 pandemic that is the most serious issue all over the world. Some researchers demonstrate that one of the crucial elements causing the bad effect of the pandemic is language. In my view of point, that idea is virtually right. I will explain my idea through three reasons such as effective communication, international diplomacy, worldwide connection. To begin with, communication’s element, language is effective communication across the response. For instance, if you use English or you live in territories, using English as your mother tongue, you will get better support from the other countries. Whereas the support of government and the vicinity of the country are the same, language helps us save time to get information about international exploration, receive truly analysis. Furthermore, language plays an indispensable role in international diplomacy. Verbalization has dissimilar meanings and emotions so we can easily illustrate our wishes and the country’s orientation. Due to the language, Viet Nam can call for help and vaccine support from America, Germany, Chinese. If we don’t have that way to communicate, all people are unaided in a difficult time when the social distancing is ongoing. Especially, poor territories and the individuals who have inadequate facilities may be affected worse than they expect. Last but not least, language is the connection of all the countries and humans. We let the others understand through language such as putting high esteem in supporters, sympathizing between here and there territories. Without language, folks will never know how to get the other's point, the thought of them, the rescuing solution to help them. Understanding is the most important factor to encounter with Covid-19, more than half of the world is living in a pandemical environment so determining of all of us minimize the development of it. To be clear, language let the neighbor closer, the continent open international exchange such as solution, vaccine, doctors, exploration so the pandemic will be solved sooner. Overall, language stays at a position that nothing can replace it. The pros of language are good for international relationships, countries, humans, and it's one of the underlying solutions to solve the pandemic problem.
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effect of the pandemic is
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. In my view of point, that
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idea
is
virtually
right. I will
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explain
my
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through three reasons such as effective communication,
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international
diplomacy, worldwide connection.

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begin
with, communication’s element,
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language
is effective communication across the response.
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, if you
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use
English or you
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live
in territories, using English as your mother tongue, you will
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get
better support from the other
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countries
. Whereas the support of
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government
and the vicinity of the
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country
are the same,
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language
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helps
us save time to
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get
information about
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international
exploration, receive
truly
analysis.

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,
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language
plays an indispensable role in
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diplomacy. Verbalization has dissimilar meanings and emotions
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so
we can
easily
illustrate our wishes and the
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country’s
orientation. Due to the
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language
,
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Nam can call for
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help
and vaccine support from America, Germany, Chinese. If we don’t have that way to communicate, all
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people
are unaided
in a difficult time when the social distancing is ongoing.
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worse than they
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.

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not least,
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is the connection of all the
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countries
and humans. We
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such as putting high esteem in supporters, sympathizing between here and
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territories. Without
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, folks will never know how to
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get
the other's point, the
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thought
of them, the rescuing solution to
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them. Understanding is the most
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factor to encounter with Covid-19, more than half of the world is living in a
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pandemical
environment
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determining of all of us minimize the development of it. To be
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,
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language
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let
the neighbor closer, the continent open
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international
exchange such as solution, vaccine, doctors, exploration
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so
the pandemic will
be solved
sooner.

Overall
,
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stays at a position that nothing can replace it. The pros of
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are
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good
for
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international
relationships,
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countries
, humans, and it's one of the underlying solutions to solve the pandemic problem.
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IELTS essay Up to now, humans still stand for the Covid-19 pandemic that is the most serious issue all over the world.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
361 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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