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write a book review of a love story

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Recently, I’ve read the book which name is “O дивный новый мир» by Oldos Haqsli. It’s an anthiutopy love story about life so far away, when there are other cultures and things in people minds. Everybody is controlling. Behavior of the main character surprised me, so I would like to share it with you. Bernard Shown – the main character in this talk. Question is – what was so suprising during the reading the this book? He behaves like normal human nowadays. But this book tells us about future. So maybe for us he was quit normal, for his city and ever friends he was a stranger. How he can be so strong to go against systen of the world. To fight for his thoughts. To try to save his relation to this life. Maybe in book author was thinking about him liar about fod and stupid, but still, I think he is trying to save his love to one women. That was cute.
Recently, I’ve read the
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дивный
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новый
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I would like to share it with you.

Bernard Shown
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the main character in this talk. Question is
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what was
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strong to go against
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of the world. To fight for his thoughts. To try to save his relation to this life. Maybe in
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author was thinking about him liar about
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and stupid,
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. That was cute.
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IELTS essay write a book review of a love story

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
164 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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