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Write a 150-200-word compare-contrast paragraph about a city life and a country life.

Write a 150-200-word compare-contrast paragraph about a city life and a country life. y7kbd
People have their own perspectives in choosing which places they live. Some people choose city to live for many benefits. Others choose country for advantageous aspects like natural scenery, . . . Both city life and country life have the advantages and disadvantages for people to decide which places they should live. While living in city, you are provided the latest technologies like smartphones, Internet, . . . to buy and use immediately and also, received the greatest standard of education, medical treament with high quality facilities. Because of the modernization and latest in city life, people have to spend much money on the cost of living. Conversely, you must wait for a long time to receive the latest technologies or high standard facilities to get access to that but the cost of living is much more cheaper than in city. In city life, facing with emissions or pollutions becomes the normal things. However, those bad factors will affect seriously on health, cause some dangerous diseases. Whereas, you can enjoy the fresh air and easily take a deep breath. Moreover, you also suffer the traffic jame every peak time, it is such an annoying issue while you can go wherever you want when you live in country with wide road. To sum up, both city life and country live have their own advantages and disadvantages. Living in city cost much more money but it gives you modern things, high level facitilies and you have to face with serious illness issue. On the contrary, country life cost less money but it give you the peace and fresh air, reduce the diseases.
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perspectives in choosing which places they
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live
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Some
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people
choose city to
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live
for
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many
benefits. Others choose
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country
for advantageous aspects like natural scenery
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Both city
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life
and
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country
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life
have the advantages and disadvantages for
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people
to decide which places they should
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live
.

While
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living
in city, you
are provided
the latest technologies like smartphones, Internet
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.
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to
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buy
and
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immediately and
also
, received the greatest standard of education, medical
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treament
with high quality facilities.
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Because
of the modernization and latest in city
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life
,
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people
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have to
spend much money on the
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cost
of
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living
.
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, you
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must
wait for a long time to receive the latest technologies or high standard facilities to
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get
access to that
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but
the
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cost
of
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living
is much
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more cheaper
than in city.

In city
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life
, facing with emissions or pollutions becomes the normal things.
However
, those
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bad
factors will affect
seriously
on health, cause
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some
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diseases. Whereas, you can enjoy the fresh air and
easily
take a deep breath.
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, you
also
suffer the traffic
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jame
every peak time, it is such an annoying issue while you can go wherever you want when you
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live
in
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country
with wide road.

To sum up, both city
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life
and
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country
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live
have their
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own
advantages and disadvantages.
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Living
in city
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cost
much more money
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but
it gives you modern things, high level
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facitilies
and you
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have to
face with serious illness issue.
On the contrary
,
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country
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life
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cost
less money
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but
it
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give
you the peace and fresh air,
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reduce
the diseases.
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IELTS essay Write a 150-200-word compare-contrast paragraph about a city life and a country life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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