Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe yourself and your communication habits

Describe yourself and your communication habits 2K2yX
Good afternoon teacher! My name is Vu Huyen Phuong. I come from Thai Nguyen city. This year I am 19 year old. Now, I am studying at National Economics University. I’am keen on listening to music, watching movies and shopping. I am an out going, sociable and friendly. Sometimes, I am a bad-tempered and as stubborn as a mule. I think I need to learn to hold back. Because, sometimes anger spoils everything. In communication need listening and understanding, and I have to learn them more, it will help me better in communication and in life.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Good
afternoon teacher!

My name is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vu
Possible spelling mistake found.
Huyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phuong
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from Thai Nguyen city. This year I am 19 year
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, I am studying at National Economics University. I’am keen on listening to music, watching movies and shopping. I am an out going, sociable and friendly.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
, I am a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
-tempered and as stubborn as a mule. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I need to learn to hold back.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
anger spoils everything. In communication need listening and understanding, and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
learn them more, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me better in communication and in life.

IELTS essay Describe yourself and your communication habits

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Describe yourself and your communication habits