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Topic: Studying online is becoming increasingly popular. This is especially true during the COVID-19 pandemic. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages of studying online.

Topic: Studying online is becoming increasingly popular. This is especially true during the COVID-19 pandemic. w7D8l
In this day and age, online learning has become increasingly popular among teachers and students because of COVID 19 pandemic and this trend perceived differently by learners. Many students perceive that this is a feasible solution for the disability of going to school during pandemic, while others think that it is not as much effective as classroom learning. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of online learning. To begin with, online learning can provides students more convenient studying conditions, flexible time schedules and less expense for the learners. They can learn anywhere at anytime they want as well as adequate devices and Internet connection. Moreover, they are able to attend their desired course and subjects on their suitable time or make use of many apps during learning online. Teachers can also engender more captivating lectures for their students. This gives a great opportunity to gain new technological skills as well as economically efficient and time-saving. However, online courses can have numerous drawbacks. Firstly, students can be distracted by other things such as Tik Tok, Facebook or Instagram, etc. and make some deficit in concentration on the lecture, this conducive in the quality of learning and seriously lack of knowledge. As a result, students find it as a less effective learning method than that of in the classroom. Secondly, there may have some connections problems may disturb the progress of studying so that learners can’t effectively absorb the knowledge that the teachers impart to them. In conclusion, the ever growing availability of online learning has gained its popularity among the young adults, which is perceived as beneficial by many people while others find it to be less effective. The emphasis can be given to its effectiveness to establish a temporary solution throughout COVID 19 pandemic.
In this day and age,
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learning
has become
increasingly
popular among teachers and
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students
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because
of
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COVID 19
pandemic and this trend perceived
differently
by learners.
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Many
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students
perceive that this is a feasible solution for the disability of going to school during pandemic, while others
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think
that it is not as much effective as classroom
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learning
. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of
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online
learning.

To
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begin
with,
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online
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learning
can provides
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students
more convenient studying conditions, flexible time schedules and less expense for the learners. They can learn anywhere at anytime they want
as well
as adequate devices and Internet connection.
Moreover
, they are able to attend their desired course and subjects on their suitable time or
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make
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use
of
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many
apps during
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learning
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online
. Teachers can
also
engender more captivating lectures for their
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students
. This gives a great opportunity to gain new technological
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skills
as well
as
economically
efficient and time-saving.

However
,
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online
courses can have numerous drawbacks.
Firstly
,
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students
can
be distracted
by other things such as
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Tik Tok
, Facebook or Instagram, etc. and
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make
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some
deficit in concentration on the lecture, this conducive in the quality of
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learning
and
seriously
lack of knowledge.
As a result
,
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students
find it as a less effective
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learning
method than that of in the classroom.
Secondly
, there may have
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some
connections problems may disturb the progress of studying
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so
that learners can’t
effectively
absorb the knowledge that the teachers impart to them.

In conclusion
, the ever growing availability of
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online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
has gained its popularity among the young adults, which
is perceived
as beneficial by
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many
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people
while others find it to be less effective. The emphasis can be
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given
to its effectiveness to establish a temporary solution throughout
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID 19
pandemic.
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IELTS essay Topic: Studying online is becoming increasingly popular. This is especially true during the COVID-19 pandemic.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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