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Would you rather never use social media sites or apps again or never watch another film or TV series? Explain your choice.

Would you rather never use social media sites or apps again or never watch another film or TV series? Explain your choice. obqoK
I would rather never watch television films than not being able to use social media sites and applications. Over the past couple of months, despite having to use a mobile phone throughout the day, I could scarcely recall any names of films and movies. While on the other hand, I never took even a single day off without using and visiting social media networks. After a not-so thorough analysis of the merits and demerits of social media, I came to find plenty of positive things along with several negative aspects about it. Firstly, with the help of social media, we can communicate with people separated by the geographical landscape. The network of people, without whom we would not have lived a purposeful life. However, films are purely made for those who seek entertainment. Secondly, social media has a greater audience and thereby, allowing people to start new businesses and create entertaining content. Considering all the above-mentioned things, I would choose not to watch films and TV series.
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rather
never
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watch
television films than not being able to
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use
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social
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media
sites and applications. Over the past couple of months, despite having to
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use
a mobile phone throughout the day, I could
scarcely
recall any names of films and movies. While
on the other hand
, I never took even a single day off without using and visiting
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
networks.

After a not-
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so
thorough analysis of the merits and demerits of
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social
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media
, I came to find
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plenty
of
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positive
things along with several
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negative
aspects about it.
Firstly
, with the
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help
of
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
, we can communicate with
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people
separated by the geographical landscape. The network of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, without whom we would not have
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lived
a purposeful life.
However
, films are
purely
made for those who seek entertainment.
Secondly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
has a greater audience and thereby, allowing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
new businesses and create entertaining content.

Considering all the above-mentioned things, I would choose not to
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watch
films and TV series.
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IELTS essay Would you rather never use social media sites or apps again or never watch another film or TV series? Explain your choice.

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