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would you rather be funny or clever

would you rather be funny or clever NyrlN

I prefer to be intelligent person who not only have massive knowledge but also take several advantages to the world and human development. I have a gained ambitious which can change the world following the positive aspect, improve the global economy and standard of living by investing more advanced technological gadget. therefore, to reach the purpose, i contend that with the aid of clever brain and perseverance will obviously support me research to success. besides, genius is always admired by the inhabitants who have expected the innovation and broaden the horizon of human. However, if using improperly clever brain for the disadvantage, this will be have detrimental effects and seriously demolish the development of the world.

I prefer to be intelligent person who not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 have massive knowledge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 take several advantages to the world and human development. I have a gained ambitious which can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the world following the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 aspect, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the global economy and standard of living by investing more advanced technological gadget. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTherefore
therefore
, to reach the purpose, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 contend that with the aid of clever brain and perseverance will obviously
 support me research to success. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBesides
besides
, genius is always admired by the inhabitants who have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 the innovation and broaden the horizon of human. However
, if using improperly
 clever brain for the disadvantage, this will be Consider using the past participle "had"?had
have
 detrimental effects and seriously
 demolish the development of the world. 