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In many countries, there is a lot of rubbish (garbage) because more and more people are buying more and more things. What are the causes? Does your country have the same problem?

In many countries, there is a lot of rubbish (garbage) because more and more people are buying more and more things. What are the causes? Does your country have the same problem? aJw8w
In this day and age, proliferation of garbage by and by getting at an alarming rate and thus become a burning issue. Owing to people are getting much more either imperative or gratuitous things which leads to heap of garbage. My country is also on the same page. In the subsequent paragraphs I would discuss the causes of the same. To embark with, there are myriad of compelling causes which leg up for escalation of trash. Increasing number of population is one of the paramount factor. More pile up of garbage is directly proportional to more number of masses. If compare with thrifty people from dim and distant past, nowdays turning more extravagant. Furthermore, marketing gimmicks to sell products adding fuel to the fire and then have leave no stone unturned to captivate and entice people to buy more and more things with alluring and bizzare packaging. Therefore, Culminate with more rubbish, albeit even if grudgingly. Case in point is, According to the research conducted by economologists, suggests that 70% of people having more propensity towards those things having attractive packaging, having said that either it will lucrative for them or not. My country India have also been grappling this issue for decades, owing to people are not aware with this matter that how on earth it could be precarious for them in near future. In lieu of ameleorate the kink, it as good as it gets and going from bad to worse. However, ultimately unambiguously without any qualms, posterity will have to face the music. At the end, I would like to culminate that apart from a good few reasons, people ought to not buy things gratuitously but according to their needs. They should abstain from being profligate and shun to be get hoodwinked by marketing tactics.
In this day and age, proliferation of garbage by and by getting at an alarming rate and
thus
become a burning issue. Owing to
people
are getting much more either imperative or gratuitous things which leads to heap of garbage. My country is
also
on the same page. In the subsequent paragraphs I would discuss the causes of the same.

To embark with, there are myriad of compelling causes which leg up for escalation of trash. Increasing number of population is one of the paramount factor. More pile up of garbage is
directly
proportional to more number of masses. If compare with thrifty
people
from dim and distant past,
nowdays
turning more extravagant.
Furthermore
, marketing gimmicks to sell products adding fuel to the fire and then have
leave
no stone unturned to captivate and entice
people
to
buy
more and more things with alluring and
bizzare
packaging.
Therefore
, Culminate with more rubbish, albeit even if
grudgingly
. Case in point is, According to the research conducted by
economologists
, suggests that 70% of
people
having more propensity towards those things having attractive packaging, having said that either it will lucrative for them or not.

My country India have
also
been grappling this issue for decades, owing to
people
are not aware with this matter that how on earth it could be precarious for them in near future. In lieu of
ameleorate
the kink, it as
good
as it
gets
and going from
bad
to worse.
However
,
ultimately
unambiguously
without any qualms, posterity will
have to
face the music.

At the
end
, I would like to culminate that apart from a
good
few reasons,
people
ought to not
buy
things
gratuitously
but
according to their needs. They should abstain from being profligate and shun to be
get
hoodwinked by marketing tactics.
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IELTS essay In many countries, there is a lot of rubbish (garbage) because more and more people are buying more and more things. What are the causes? Does your country have the same problem?

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