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Would you like going into a vacation this year or not?

Would you like going into a vacation this year or not? lDPD
Every year we go to Florida. We like to go to the beach. My favorite beach is called Emerson Beach. It is very long, with soft sand and palm trees. It is very beautiful. I like to make sandcastles and watch the sailboats go by. Sometimes there are dolphins and whales in the water! Every morning we look for shells in the sand. I found fifteen big shells last year. I put them in a special place in my room. This year I want to learn to surf. It is hard to surf, but so much fun! My sister is a good surfer. She says that she can teach me. I hope I can do it!
Every year we go to Florida. We like to go to the beach.

My favorite beach
is called
Emerson Beach. It is
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very
long, with soft sand and palm trees. It is
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very
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beautiful
. I like to
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make
sandcastles and
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watch
the sailboats go by.
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Sometimes
there are dolphins and whales in the water!

Every morning we look for shells in the sand. I found fifteen
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big
shells last year. I put them in a special place in my room. This year I want to learn to surf. It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to surf,
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but
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so
much fun! My sister is a
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good
surfer. She says that she can teach me. I hope I can do it!

IELTS essay Would you like going into a vacation this year or not?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
116 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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