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world changers- top ten inventions

world changers- top ten inventions eAnlK

I think most of all these inventions are very important. The invention of the wheel and the engine makes it easy for us to travel long distances. So we spend less time on the road. The discovery of the telephone and the internet helps us to communicate more easily with distant friends and relatives. I think the most important of these discoveries are languages and antibiotics. Because language is a very important factor in our evolution. If people can't talk, they have a hard time communicating their ideas to others. Antibiotics and other drugs help heal our illnesses. We should be grateful to doctors and chemists for this. Our life in our age is significantly connected with networks of electricity and electrical equipment. That's why electricity is also an important invention. But I don't think the iPhone is an important invention. Because not every person has an Iphone and it is unimportant.

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help
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