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Most of the people believe that formal education is not sufficient. for getting good jobs university degree is necessary

Most of the people believe that formal education is not sufficient. for getting good jobs university degree is necessary 0EoLO
Many people thinks that formal education is sufficient for job while others believe that university degree is necessary for getting good jobs. in my opinion formal education can help to achieve to getting desire jobs because Experience and hand skill are most important for any job. In job workplace we have to know about jobs. experience people can done any job easily than university graduate students. In this competitive age getting only university degree is not sufficient on workplace experience always matter. Done any job with perfection need different type of skill like time management, Task management and many more these skills help us to do done any job within short period of time. In conclusion, although university degree is very crucial at this competitive world while doing formal education can sufficient for done any kind of jobs.
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while others believe that
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are most
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graduate students. In this competitive age getting
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degree is not sufficient on workplace experience always matter. Done any
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with perfection need
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like time management, Task management and
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degree is
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IELTS essay Most of the people believe that formal education is not sufficient. for getting good jobs university degree is necessary

Essay
  American English
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138 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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