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working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.

working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. K3NjM

On the one hand, there is a body of opinion that the parents feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family. In other words, grandparents or relatives are relatives by blood, so they will also love and care for children like their own. For instance, a recent study showed that 62% of mothers prefer to leave their young ones with grandparents and siblings when they are at work. In contrast, a baby sister is a trained child care professionals and may have the skills required to fully nurture a child, but no one can be sure the unexpected will not happen such as childcare centers are not a scammer or they treat kids well.

On the one hand, there is a body of opinion that the parents feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family. In other words
, grandparents or relatives are relatives by blood, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they will also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 and care for children like their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. For instance
, a recent study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 that 62% of mothers prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 their young ones with grandparents and siblings when they are at work. In contrast
, a baby sister is a trained child care professionals and may have the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 required to fully
 nurture a child, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 no one can be sure the unexpected will not happen such as childcare centers are not a Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).scammer, or
scammer or
 they treat kids well. 