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Working in the same place.

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Many people spend their whole working career with the same company. However, some people believe that you should gain experience and explore a new locations. It is very common for some people to become comfortable with tier workplace and refuse to change jobs. There are some benefits to continue with the same job for a long time, To start with, workers who stay happy at work are more likely to grow professionaly. Also, they might create comfort zone around themselves by working at the same place. They are more likely to get along with their co-workers and even their bosses. Even better, they ore one of last to lose their job. On the other hand, there are a lot of advantages for changing jobs. The biggest advantage is the chance to get a lot of experiences. When a person starts an new job, It is hard to decide if they are enjoying it or not,
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IELTS essay Working in the same place.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
155 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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