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My relationship with my mother.

My relationship with my mother. 06Qw3

First of all, I love my Mom. She is the best person in my world. I can’t enjoy my life without her because I need her at every single stage of my life. I always take the opinion of my mother before taking any decision not because of her experience with the life but just because she will always think of something better for me. We don’t have a very unique bond but just like others. We enjoy each other’s company, we fight, we play, we talk about everything going in our lives. We don’t maintain any secrets from each other. We sometimes don’t like each other’s nature but that’s okay. She is my best friend. We have bad days, but we can’t be angry at each other for more than a day. We always find a way to please each other. I can’t even think of a better bond than a mother and her child. I just want to thank her for being in my life.

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