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working in people's lives

working in people's lives EPYb

Working is taking a lot of time of people's lives. To survive and to have a normal life you need to be financially secure. It is something important to every normal person. People are working so much because they need their paychecks. You get them when you are working. Some people got money from the trust funds. Everyone needs money to live. They can spend then to buy stocks, food or for shopping. This raises the question of how to divides them. Some people might calm that if you save 30 percent of them, you will secure your further. It is typical to have savings but a lot of people spend more than they have. They end you with loans. Some people think it is better if you work for one company for your entire life. It is because you become secure that they will be paying you always good and they will never fire you. But that isn’t always right. On other hand, you will be not motivated to show your work in front of others. In my opinion, the trend of working so much isn’t bad. People are independent and work for everything they have. Sadly, money is making people materialistic. They are ready to do everything about them. Some people start relationships and fake love just to be financially secure. It is alarming about people's behavior.

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. To survive and to have a normal life you need to be financially
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buy
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 spend more than they have. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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company
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because
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 that isn’t always right. On other hand, you will be not motivated to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
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In my opinion, the trend of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
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so
 much isn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 are independent and work for everything they have. Sadly
, money is making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 materialistic. They are ready to do everything about them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 relationships and fake This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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secure
. It is alarming about This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's behavior. 