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Importance of parenthood learning school

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According to Waterford. org, an organization seeking to help children succeed through access to lifelong education, the participation of parents in the educational process means that teachers and parents share the responsibility to teach students and work together to achieve educational goals. To this end, the organization suggests that teachers invite parents to regular school meetings and events and that parents voluntarily commit to prioritizing these goals. Lamentably, parents' involvement in the educational process has been in decline since 2016, according to data from Blackboard. Many parents believe that the communication between them and teachers is ineffective, so they prefer online communication (via texts, emails, or social networks) methods rather than to attend conferences or briefings with teachers face-to-face. Although getting more involved would help improve communication, this low attendance reflects declining support and time availability of the parents. According to a meta-analysis of more than fifty studies on parent involvement in high schools, there is a direct connection between students' academic performance and the participation of parents in their children's education. Furthermore, the earlier that a connection is established between parents and the educational process of their children, the more robust is the foundation for the success of the student.
According to Waterford.
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, an organization seeking to
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children succeed through access to lifelong education, the participation of
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parents
in the
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educational
process means that
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teachers
and
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parents
share the responsibility to teach students and work together to achieve
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educational
goals. To this
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, the organization suggests that
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teachers
invite
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parents
to regular school meetings and
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events
and that
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parents
voluntarily
commit to prioritizing these goals.

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, parents' involvement in the
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educational
process has been in decline since 2016, according to data from Blackboard.
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Many
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parents
believe that the communication between them and
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teachers
is ineffective,
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so
they prefer online communication (via texts, emails, or social networks) methods
rather
than to attend conferences or briefings with
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teachers
face-to-face. Although getting more involved would
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help
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communication, this low attendance reflects declining support and time availability of the parents.

According to a meta-analysis of more than fifty studies on
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parent
involvement in high schools, there is a direct
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connection between
students' academic performance and the participation of
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parents
in their children's education.
Furthermore
, the earlier that a connection
is established
between
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parents
and the
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educational
process of their children, the more robust is the foundation for the success of the student.
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IELTS essay Importance of parenthood learning school

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
201 words
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