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Working hard is the best way to be successful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Working hard is the best way to be successful. GrKAL
It is acknowledged by plenty of individuals that working hard is the best way to be successful. I totally agree with this assertion due to a couple of reasons, which will be discussed in- detail in this essay. The main reason behind my point of view is that if you are working hard, you will be successful. For instance, by working hard, you will become rich. This is because of the evidence that the more working hard you are, the less stupid you are. Hence one of the effective ways to working hard, you will become strong person. Everyone should finds the best work The other reason why I disagree with this opinion is that not only does love to work, but also you will be working hard. A clear example to illustrate this is that by studying hard, you will become successful. The prime reason of it is that you will learning hard, you will work simple, not hard. As to why, we should learn very well. As have been observed it can be concluded that we should working hard. Because of working, working hard is the best way.
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behind my point of view is that if you are
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, you will be successful.
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, you will become rich. This is
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of the evidence that the more
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you are, the less stupid you are.
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, you will become strong person. Everyone should
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, you will become successful. The prime
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. As to why, we should learn
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IELTS essay Working hard is the best way to be successful.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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