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working a part time job while studying

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In summary, working a part time job while studying kills two birds with one stone. It will give a lot of advantages to the students for their future life. For instance, they will have good time management which is a must thing for career development, they can be more financially independent. Besides, they will also gain crucial transferrable skills and finally, the students will have networking opportunities. All of these are very useful and will benefit them a lot in the future especially for their dream job.
In summary, working a
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part time
job while studying kills two birds with one stone. It will give
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a lot of
advantages to the students for their future life.
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, they will have
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good
time management which is a
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must
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thing
for career development, they can be more
financially
independent.
Besides
, they will
also
gain crucial
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transferrable
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skills
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, the students will have networking opportunities. All of these are
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very
useful and will benefit them a lot in the future
especially
for their dream job.

IELTS essay working a part time job while studying

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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