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Adolescents who work part-time jobs and make money after graduated can have a foundation of knowledge and experience. Indeed, when you work in a diversified environment, obviously a chance to access many kinds of job brings us more practice. Working for a long time improves helpful skills such as communication or confident which very helpful for future carer. In addition, we can find our strength during time and know limited things, from there have more lessons for yourself. It is very necessary to be aware how importance of having adventure in life.
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necessary to be aware how importance of having adventure in life.
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IELTS essay work part time job can have a basic lessons

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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