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Women are more fashion-conscious than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Women are more fashion-conscious than men. with this opinion? a8pp9
Being fashionable is something on which people put so much stress on. Mostly, it is said that women are more fashion-conscious as compared to men. Well, i partially agree with this statement and i intend to shed light on my view points in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, it is often said that women are more concerned about fashion. This statement is both true and false, First and foremost reason behind this is that there is so many varieties available when it comes about women fashion.
Being fashionable is something on which
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with this statement and
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intend to shed light on my view points in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, it is
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said that women are more concerned about fashion. This statement is both true and false,
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and foremost reason behind this is that there is
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varieties available when it
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IELTS essay Women are more fashion-conscious than men. with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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