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Women are more fashion-conscious than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Women are more fashion-conscious than men. with this opinion? a8pp9

Being fashionable is something on which people put so much stress on. Mostly, it is said that women are more fashion-conscious as compared to men. Well, i partially agree with this statement and i intend to shed light on my view points in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, it is often said that women are more concerned about fashion. This statement is both true and false, First and foremost reason behind this is that there is so many varieties available when it comes about women fashion.

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IELTS essay Women are more fashion-conscious than men. with this opinion?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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