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The climate change on our earth.

The climate change on our earth. QMY9K
THE CLIMATE CHANGERECENTLY WE ARE FACING THE CLIMATE CHANGE IN OUR ATMOSPHERE, MAINLY ANTARCTICA TERRITORY ARE FACING THIS KIND OF PROBLEMS, HERE WE CAN SEEN THE TEMPERATURE GOING TO HIGH. it's effected to our sea water level, and near sea area are under caution. this is mostly effected by our pollution like air and water. climate changes most danger to our Eco-system. How we can Handel that kind of situation, First we can minimise our daily basis pollution. and used mostly that kind of source which one helped our environment and Eco-system.
THE CLIMATE
CHANGERECENTLY
WE ARE FACING THE CLIMATE
CHANGE
IN OUR ATMOSPHERE,
MAINLY
ANTARCTICA TERRITORY ARE FACING THIS KIND OF PROBLEMS, HERE WE CAN
SEEN
THE TEMPERATURE GOING
TO
HIGH.
it
's effected to our sea water level, and near sea area are under caution.
this
is
mostly
effected by our pollution like air and water.
climate
changes
most
danger
to our Eco-system. How we can Handel that kind of situation,
First
we can
minimise
our daily basis pollution.
and
used
mostly
that kind of source which one
helped
our environment and Eco-system.
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IELTS essay The climate change on our earth.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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