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Without a doubt that would be radio.

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Without a doubt that would be radio. Radio enables communications, RADAR, and so many other things. Before the wireless telegraph, the first radio device, seafaring was far more dangerous and rarely was anything known about what caused a lost ship to go down. Without radio, any form of large scale or long range aviation would have been impossible to coordinate, and communication cross-ocean would only be possible by mail. Without radio science we would not fully understand A/C electricity, and we would be stuck using the old 12 volt DC electricity that could never travel more than 50 miles. This is not to get into the fact that even the concept of a basic modem, in addition to broadband are based on the concept of modulation that was original developed for radio. Computer communications would have never been able to exceed a mile without the technology developed for radio and computers would never have been revolutionary technology.
Without a doubt that would be radio.

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and rarely was anything known about what caused a lost ship to go down.

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, any form of large scale or long range aviation would have been impossible to coordinate, and communication cross-ocean would
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science we would not
fully
understand A/C electricity, and we would
be stuck
using the
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12 volt DC electricity that could never travel more than
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into the fact that even the concept of a basic modem,
in addition
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are based
on the concept of modulation that was original developed for
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radio
. Computer communications would have never been able to exceed a mile without the technology developed for
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radio
and computers would never have been revolutionary technology.
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IELTS essay Without a doubt that would be radio.

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6 paragraphs
157 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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