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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants.

Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. 7rqAY
Food plays a significant role in our everyday life but, unfortunately, not every person is aware of such a problem as waste of food. This essay will specify main factors which cause products to be thrown away at restaurants or homes and propose ways of tackling this problem. At least two important reasons help to explain why food has been thrown away in recent decades. Firstly, people in restaurants happen to order too many dishes which they cannot consume. The reason for this is that restaurant-keepers do not inform their clients about the size of the meals they serve. As a result, customers can not finish the ordered food and it is thrown away into the rubbish bin. Secondly, people may purchase too much products in the supermarkets. This phenomenon happens due to very inventive strategies of marketing specialists who are in charge of creating very vivid and attractive packaging. Thus, customers are getting dependent on these marketing tricks and buy not the amount of food they actually need but even more than that. Eventually, some of the purchased products rot in the fridge after which go directly to the garbage bin. Resolving this issue involves converting the public’s attitude towards spending disposable income on food. It is crucially important to conduct raising awareness campaigns. For instance, authorities might launch an initiative to inform citizens how drastically wasted food affects the environment. Such projects could be carried out via advertisements on public transport. If these actions are taken it will not only warn people about dangerous consequences of food wastage but also educate them on proper shopping habits. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the problem of food waste exists in many states. If we want this issue to be tackled than actions in this direction must be taken in the shortest time possible.
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Food
plays a significant role in our everyday life
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but
, unfortunately, not every person is aware of such a problem as waste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. This essay will specify main factors which cause products to
be thrown
away at restaurants or homes and propose ways of tackling this problem.

At least two
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important
reasons
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help
to
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why
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food
has
been thrown
away in recent decades.
Firstly
,
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people
in restaurants happen to order too
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many
dishes which they cannot consume.
The reason for this is
that restaurant-keepers do not inform their clients about the size of the meals they serve.
As a result
, customers can not finish the ordered
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food
and it
is thrown
away into the rubbish bin.
Secondly
,
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people
may
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purchase
too
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much
products in the supermarkets. This phenomenon happens due to
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very
inventive strategies of marketing specialists who are in charge of creating
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very
vivid and attractive packaging.
Thus
, customers are getting dependent on these marketing tricks and
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buy
not the amount of
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food
they actually need
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but
even more than that.
Eventually
,
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some of the
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purchased
products rot in the fridge after which go
directly
to the garbage bin.

Resolving this issue involves converting the public’s attitude towards spending disposable income on
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food
. It is
crucially
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important
to conduct raising awareness campaigns.
For instance
, authorities might launch an initiative to inform citizens how
drastically
wasted
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food
affects the environment. Such projects could
be carried
out via advertisements on public transport. If these actions
are taken
it will not
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only
warn
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people
about
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dangerous
consequences of
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food
wastage
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but
also
educate them on proper shopping habits.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that the problem of
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food
waste exists in
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many
states.
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If
we want this issue to
be tackled
than actions in this direction
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must
be taken
in the shortest time possible.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
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