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Do you agree or disagree with the use of animals in medical research?

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Medicine is one of the most crucial factors that determine the developed countries’ development worldwide. Some people argue that animal testing these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. In this essay, the use of animals in medical research will be briefly discussed in various aspects. It is widely assumed that the use of animals research would undoubtedly confer a variety of benefits to a humane society. Animal experiments, according to those who favor them, are necessary. Many well-known life-saving medications, for example, were developed in this manner, and animal research may aid in the discovery of more isolated therapies in the future. Indeed, a cure for cancer and AIDS may be on the horizon. Furthermore, the animals which are consumed are not often wild but are bred specifically for research purposes. As a result, they do not feel that animal studies are to blame for the dwindling number of wild animals on the earth. However, some people believe that medical advancements involving the use of animals are cruel and inappropriate. Opponents of such a study believe that humans have no right to subject animals to such traumatic experiences and that all species' lives should be valued. They feel that the advantages to humans do not outweigh the pain and that scientists should perform a study using different approaches. In conclusion, it is clear from the brief analysis that both sides of animal testing receive a distinct impact. Nonetheless, unlike most other social issues, the arguments about this topic must be analyzed in a flexible manner depending on the circumstances.
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developed countries
’ development worldwide.
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Some
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people
argue that
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animal
testing these experiments should
be banned
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because
it is
morally
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wrong
to cause
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animals
to suffer, while others are in favor of them
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because
of their benefits to humanity. In this essay, the
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use
of
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animals
in medical
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research
will be
briefly
discussed in various aspects.

It is
widely
assumed that the
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use
of
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animals
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research
would
undoubtedly
confer a variety of benefits to a humane society.
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Animal
experiments, according to those who favor them, are necessary.
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Many
well-known life-saving medications,
for example
,
were developed
in this manner, and
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animal
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research
may aid in the discovery of more isolated therapies in the future.
Indeed
, a cure for cancer and AIDS may be on the horizon.
Furthermore
, the
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animals
which
are consumed
are not
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often
wild
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but
are bred
specifically
for
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research
purposes.
As a result
, they do not feel that
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animal
studies are to blame for the dwindling number of wild
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animals
on the earth.

However
,
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some
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people
believe that medical advancements involving the
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use
of
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animals
are cruel and inappropriate. Opponents of such a study believe that humans have no right to subject
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animals
to such traumatic experiences and that all species'
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lives
should
be valued
. They feel that the advantages to humans do not outweigh the pain and that scientists should perform a study using
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different
approaches.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
from the brief analysis that both sides of
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animal
testing receive a distinct impact. Nonetheless, unlike most other social issues, the arguments about this topic
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must
be analyzed
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in a flexible manner
depending on the circumstances.
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IELTS essay with the use of animals in medical research?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.5
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