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What does community mean to you? How do you contribute to the well-being of your community?

What does community mean to you? How do you contribute to the well-being of your community? J3LKj
Community is the surrounding area where I’m growing. Not just the surroundings I am around, but where I can learn and grow into a better person. Do you ever think about whether you belong or not to the community you are in? I’ve been questioning things like that from time to time. Do I deserve things like this, am I enough to feel like this… The reason is the community is the best thing I have in my life right now. I feel safe and protected. The people in my community, school, family, relatives, neighborhood, friends, never hesitate to support me in whatever situation I am going through and share the warmest feeling I can ever feel. Even when I am questioning myself with doubtful things, I remember I am the best that I can ever be at the moment. I try not to slow myself down, make myself the best example I can be, cheer and care for others, and never give up. I admire and learn from them that I never hesitate to reach a hand who needs it. Even the sense of responsibility never leaves me behind. I hope the younger generation will have hope from seeing our examples. For now, it’s the best I can do as a student. But when I become an adult and a more mature person, I wish I can contribute more to my community and environment. Just like I did this summer, I want to attend more volunteer works and forestation activities in the future. Becoming an adult would let me encounter a lot of community and people as well, but I am sure it will only let me grow up rather than anything.
Community
is the surrounding area where I’m growing. Not
just
the surroundings I am around,
but
where I can learn and grow into a better person.

Do you ever
think
about whether you belong or not to the
community
you are in? I’ve been questioning things like that from time to time. Do I deserve things like this, am I
enough
to feel like this… The reason is the
community
is the
best
thing I have in my life right
now
. I feel safe and protected. The
people
in my
community
, school, family, relatives, neighborhood, friends, never hesitate to support me in whatever situation I am going through and share the warmest feeling I can ever feel.

Even when I am questioning myself with doubtful things, I remember I am the
best
that I can ever be at the moment. I try not to slow myself down,
make
myself the
best
example I can be, cheer and care for others, and never give up. I admire and learn from them that I never hesitate to reach a hand who needs it. Even the sense of responsibility never
leaves
me behind. I hope the younger generation will have hope from seeing our examples. For
now
, it’s the
best
I can do as a student.

But
when I become an adult and a more mature person, I wish I can contribute more to my
community
and environment.
Just
like I did this summer, I want to attend more volunteer works and forestation activities in the future.

Becoming an adult would
let
me encounter
a lot of
community
and
people
as well
,
but
I am sure it will
only
let
me grow up
rather
than anything.
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IELTS essay What does community mean to you? How do you contribute to the well-being of your community?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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