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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some People see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.15

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some People see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 15
These days, while online books have become increasingly popular, a decrease has been noted in paper books. Although some people accept this as a good initiative forward, others have a contrasting view. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of both types in detail. Electronic books have definitely been a good development according to some. This is because, not only they can get access to a wide collection of books on various networking sites, they also get access to the latest updated version of these books. Certain medical websites, for instance, have been designed to share soft copies of latest edition of books that are not yet available in bookstores. These people, therefore consider online books to be a better alternative where they can receive updated knowledge, free of cost. In contrast to people who prefer online reading, are those who maintain that hard copies are superior. They have reason to believe that having a book literally in front of you, enables you to concentrate far better than reading the same on your computer as it keeps you away from the distractions of surfing on the net. For example, when it has been stated in a research that people who read books online are more likely to encounter a considerable delay in terminating their books as compared to those who read its paper version. Hence, according to these people, reading from an actual book is more beneficial as it saves time. In conclusion, while electronic books have seen a rapid surge, a drop has been observed in conventional books. Even though e books is favoured by some, others still feel that it cannot replace paper based books.
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have become
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some
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people
accept this as a
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initiative forward, others have a contrasting view. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of both types in detail.

Electronic
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books
have definitely been a
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good
development according to
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some
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, not
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only
they can
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get
access to a wide collection of
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books
on various networking sites, they
also
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get
access to the latest updated version of these
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books
. Certain medical websites,
for instance
, have
been designed
to share soft copies of
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latest
edition of
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books
that are not
yet
available in bookstores. These
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people
,
therefore
consider
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online
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books
to be a better alternative where they can receive updated knowledge, free of cost.

In contrast
to
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people
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who
prefer
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online
reading, are those
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who
maintain that
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hard
copies are superior. They have reason to believe that having a
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book
literally
in front of you, enables you to concentrate far better than reading the same on your computer as it
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keeps
you away from the distractions of surfing on the net.
For example
, when it has
been stated
in a research that
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people
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who
read
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books
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online
are more likely to encounter a considerable delay in terminating their
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books
as compared to those
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who
read its paper version.
Hence
, according to these
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people
, reading from an actual
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book
is more beneficial as it saves time.

In conclusion
, while electronic
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books
have
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seen
a rapid surge, a drop has
been observed
in conventional
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books
.
Even though
e
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books
is
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favoured
by
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some
, others
still
feel that it cannot replace paper based
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books
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some People see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 15

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Task Achievement: 8.5
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