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With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

THERE IS A HUGE DEVELOPMENT IN THE ELECTRONIC NOTES IN NOWADAYS. ON ONE HAND, THERE IS A GREAT BENEFITS IN USING E-BOOKS RATHER THAN PRINTED NOTES. WHILE, ON ANOTHER HAND IT HAS DISAVDANTAGES IN DOING IT. A MAJOR ADAVANATGE OF E-BOOKS IS THAT STUDENTS ARE ABLE TO CARRY THIS ALL AROUND THROUGH THEIR DAILY LIFE. SUCH NOTES ARE AVAILABLE IN MOBILE PHONES, TABLETS SO THAT THEY ARE ABLE TO VIEW AND ACCESS IT ANYWHERE. FOR EXAMPLE, IN RECENT TIMES THE STUDENTS OF OXFORD UNIVERSITY ARE DEPENDING ON E-BOOKS SO THEY CARRY IT THROUGH EASY MANNER AS OF THIS ARE SMALLER IN SIZE AND LARGE NOTES CONSUME THE LESS SPACE OF MEMORY IN TAB. WHILE, PRINTED BOOKS WANT HEAVY AREA NEEDED, SOME STUDENTS FEEL DIFICULT IN HANDLING IT. IN CONTRASTS, THERE IS LIMITATION IN OWING IT DUE TO THE OVER USAGE OF ELECTRONIC DEVICES CAN HARM THE EYES. SCHOOL OR COLLEGE CHILDREN ARE HAVING THE EYE PROBLEMS. TO BE PRECISE, THE BLUE LIGHT THAT EMIT FROM THE DEVICES CAN HAVE SEVERE ISSUES THAT LEAD TO LOSS OF POWER IN EYES. BEFORE 10 YEARS THE PEOPLE ARE USING THE BOOKS NOWADAYS, IT IS NOT LIKE THAT IT IS NOT SAFE TO USE E-BOOKS. TO CONCLUDE, E-BOOKS HAVE A VAST NUMBER OF FILES ON A SINGLE DEVICE HENCE, IT CAN HANDLE ANYWHERE IN PUBLIC. DESPICTE THE DISADVANTAGE, IT CREATE A LOTS OF PROBLEM IN EYE SIGHT.

THERE IS A HUGE DEVELOPMENT IN THE ELECTRONIC NOTES NOWADAYS is used without ‘in’. Use simply: “NOWADAYS”.NOWADAYS
IN NOWADAYS
. ON ONE HAND, THERE IS A GREAT BENEFITS IN USING E-BOOKS RATHER
 THAN PRINTED NOTES. WHILE, ON ANOTHER HAND IT HAS Possible spelling mistake found.DISADVANTAGES
DISAVDANTAGES
 IN DOING IT.

A MAJOR Possible spelling mistake found.ADVANTAGE
ADAVANATGE
 OF E-BOOKS IS THAT STUDENTS ARE ABLE TO CARRY THIS ALL AROUND THROUGH THEIR DAILY LIFE. SUCH NOTES ARE AVAILABLE IN MOBILE PHONES, TABLETS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 THAT THEY ARE ABLE TO VIEW AND ACCESS IT ANYWHERE. FOR EXAMPLE
, IN RECENT TIMES THE STUDENTS OF OXFORD UNIVERSITY The verb ‘depend’ can be stative. If ‘DEPENDING’ describes a state, change the sentence structure and use the base form of the verb.
ARE DEPENDING
 ON E-BOOKS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 THEY CARRY IT THROUGH EASY MANNER AS OF THIS ARE A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.SMALLER
SMALLER IN SIZE
 AND LARGE NOTES CONSUME THE LESS SPACE OF MEMORY IN TAB. WHILE, PRINTED BOOKS WANT HEAVY AREA NEEDED, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 STUDENTS FEEL Possible spelling mistake found.DIFFICULT
DIFICULT
 IN HANDLING IT.

IN CONTRASTS, THERE IS LIMITATION IN OWING IT DUE TO THE OVER USAGE OF ELECTRONIC DEVICES CAN HARM THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
EYES
. SCHOOL OR COLLEGE CHILDREN ARE HAVING THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
EYE
 PROBLEMS. TO BE PRECISE, THE BLUE LIGHT THAT EMIT FROM THE DEVICES CAN HAVE SEVERE ISSUES THAT LEAD TO LOSS OF POWER IN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
EYES
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
BEFORE
 10 YEARS THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 ARE USING THE BOOKS NOWADAYS, IT IS NOT LIKE THAT IT IS NOT SAFE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
USE
 E-BOOKS.

TO CONCLUDE
, E-BOOKS HAVE A VAST NUMBER OF FILES ON A SINGLE DEVICE HENCE
, IT CAN HANDLE ANYWHERE IN PUBLIC. Possible spelling mistake found.DESPITE
DESPICTE
 THE DISADVANTAGE, IT CREATE A Possible agreement error. The noun PROBLEM seems to be countable; consider using: “LOTS of problems”.LOTS of problems
LOTS OF PROBLEM
 IN This word is usually spelt together: “EYEsight”.EYEsight
EYE SIGHT
. 