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With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

THERE IS A HUGE DEVELOPMENT IN THE ELECTRONIC NOTES IN NOWADAYS. ON ONE HAND, THERE IS A GREAT BENEFITS IN USING E-BOOKS RATHER THAN PRINTED NOTES. WHILE, ON ANOTHER HAND IT HAS DISAVDANTAGES IN DOING IT. A MAJOR ADAVANATGE OF E-BOOKS IS THAT STUDENTS ARE ABLE TO CARRY THIS ALL AROUND THROUGH THEIR DAILY LIFE. SUCH NOTES ARE AVAILABLE IN MOBILE PHONES, TABLETS SO THAT THEY ARE ABLE TO VIEW AND ACCESS IT ANYWHERE. FOR EXAMPLE, IN RECENT TIMES THE STUDENTS OF OXFORD UNIVERSITY ARE DEPENDING ON E-BOOKS SO THEY CARRY IT THROUGH EASY MANNER AS OF THIS ARE SMALLER IN SIZE AND LARGE NOTES CONSUME THE LESS SPACE OF MEMORY IN TAB. WHILE, PRINTED BOOKS WANT HEAVY AREA NEEDED, SOME STUDENTS FEEL DIFICULT IN HANDLING IT. IN CONTRASTS, THERE IS LIMITATION IN OWING IT DUE TO THE OVER USAGE OF ELECTRONIC DEVICES CAN HARM THE EYES. SCHOOL OR COLLEGE CHILDREN ARE HAVING THE EYE PROBLEMS. TO BE PRECISE, THE BLUE LIGHT THAT EMIT FROM THE DEVICES CAN HAVE SEVERE ISSUES THAT LEAD TO LOSS OF POWER IN EYES. BEFORE 10 YEARS THE PEOPLE ARE USING THE BOOKS NOWADAYS, IT IS NOT LIKE THAT IT IS NOT SAFE TO USE E-BOOKS. TO CONCLUDE, E-BOOKS HAVE A VAST NUMBER OF FILES ON A SINGLE DEVICE HENCE, IT CAN HANDLE ANYWHERE IN PUBLIC. DESPICTE THE DISADVANTAGE, IT CREATE A LOTS OF PROBLEM IN EYE SIGHT.
THERE IS A HUGE DEVELOPMENT IN THE ELECTRONIC NOTES
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IN NOWADAYS
. ON ONE HAND, THERE IS A GREAT BENEFITS IN USING E-BOOKS
RATHER
THAN PRINTED NOTES. WHILE, ON ANOTHER HAND IT HAS
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DISAVDANTAGES
IN DOING IT.

A MAJOR
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ADAVANATGE
OF E-BOOKS IS THAT STUDENTS ARE ABLE TO CARRY THIS ALL AROUND THROUGH THEIR DAILY LIFE. SUCH NOTES ARE AVAILABLE IN MOBILE PHONES, TABLETS
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SO
THAT THEY ARE ABLE TO VIEW AND ACCESS IT ANYWHERE.
FOR EXAMPLE
, IN RECENT TIMES THE STUDENTS OF OXFORD UNIVERSITY
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ARE DEPENDING
ON E-BOOKS
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SO
THEY CARRY IT THROUGH EASY MANNER AS OF THIS ARE
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SMALLER IN SIZE
AND LARGE NOTES CONSUME THE LESS SPACE OF MEMORY IN TAB. WHILE, PRINTED BOOKS WANT HEAVY AREA NEEDED,
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SOME
STUDENTS FEEL
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DIFICULT
IN HANDLING IT.

IN CONTRASTS, THERE IS LIMITATION IN OWING IT DUE TO THE OVER USAGE OF ELECTRONIC DEVICES CAN HARM THE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
EYES
. SCHOOL OR COLLEGE CHILDREN ARE HAVING THE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
EYE
PROBLEMS. TO BE PRECISE, THE BLUE LIGHT THAT EMIT FROM THE DEVICES CAN HAVE SEVERE ISSUES THAT LEAD TO LOSS OF POWER IN
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
EYES
.
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BEFORE
10 YEARS THE
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
PEOPLE
ARE USING THE BOOKS NOWADAYS, IT IS NOT LIKE THAT IT IS NOT SAFE TO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
USE
E-BOOKS.

TO CONCLUDE
, E-BOOKS HAVE A VAST NUMBER OF FILES ON A SINGLE DEVICE
HENCE
, IT CAN HANDLE ANYWHERE IN PUBLIC.
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DESPICTE
THE DISADVANTAGE, IT CREATE A
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LOTS OF PROBLEM
IN
This word is usually spelt together: “EYEsight”.
EYE SIGHT
.
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IELTS essay With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
233 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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