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wave-energy machine and its location

We are now living in 21th centuary so far human evolved so much that is has diminishes all natural resources. Now the inventor thinking in othe directions or we can say that other method of power generation. Some Inventor find some nonconventinal resouceor or renewable source of energy like wave energy, geothermal energy, solar energy etc. Out of all these Wave energy is also a good idea for generation of power from the wave gnerated in sea due to variation of distance between sun and moon. But its effectiveness depends on location and water level. This implies if we install this wave energy machine to near costal area then there will be less wave generation due to low water level and on otherside away form costal area inside the sea there is water level is high but it installation require huge amount which make it infeasible economically. So we have to find the optimal location neither to far neither too close.
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its effectiveness depends on location and water level. This implies if we install this
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wave
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energy
machine to near costal area then there will be less
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generation due to low water level and on
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otherside
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IELTS essay wave-energy machine and its location

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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