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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Today we are living in Modern era of 21th centuary. Human evolved so much that he had find all necessary thing according to their requirement. Earlier if we need something then we have to go to market to buy that thing but now we have the options. This means either we but it from local shop or simply place the order online on the internet. This show how thing has been become easy and comfortable compare to earlier. Suppose i need a book then i simply go to internet and open any shopping website and place the order, after some time it will deliveredto me by some person. If we talk about advantage then there are many like no need to ga market this save time and transportation cost, we can see as many as variety, we can pay online this implies no need to handle the cash, on other side it creating employment. If we talk about disadvantage then every thing have advantage and disadvantage and here also. first the major disadvantahe is that Some people dont comfortable with handling of this internet technolgy in country like india this will creat digital gap between person known the internet and do not known. Second disadvantage is there is risk of fraud and cheating people easly fraud by some company in form of faulty product, high price and low quality. Some time it is very hard to judge the quality of product because we can inspect it we have to believe the policy of company or either experience it. But anyway overall it is good initiative and help in many way

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Today
 we are living in Modern era of Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.21st22nd23rd
21th
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centuary
. Human evolved This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much that he had The verb “find” seems to be incorrect here. Did you mean “found”, “been finding” or “to find”?foundbeen findingto find
find
 all necessary thing according to their requirement. Earlier if we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 something then we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to market to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 that thing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we have the options. This means either we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it from local shop or simply
 place the order online on the internet. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 how thing has been become
 easy and comfortable compare to earlier. Suppose Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
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need
 a book then Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
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simply
 go to internet and open any shopping website and place the order, after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time it will Possible spelling mistake found.delivered to
deliveredto
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some
 person. If we talk about advantage then there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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need
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see
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many
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need
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it creating
 employment.

If we talk about disadvantage then every thing have advantage and disadvantage and here also
.

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first
 the major Possible spelling mistake found.disadvantage
disadvantahe
 is that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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dont
Consider using “comfortable handling”.comfortable handling
comfortable with handling
 of this internet Possible spelling mistake found.technology
technolgy
 in country like Possible spelling mistake found.IndiaINDIAIndianindieIndiraIndra
india
 this will Possible spelling mistake found.greatcreatetreatcreamcrestcheat
creat
 digital gap between person known the internet and do not After the auxiliary verb ‘do’, use the base form of a verb. Did you mean “know”?know
known
. Second disadvantage is there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 of fraud and cheating This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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easly
 fraud by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in form of faulty product, high price and low quality. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 time it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to judge the quality of product This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we can inspect it we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 believe the policy of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 or either experience it.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 anyway overall
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 initiative and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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many way