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With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.3

With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 3
In this contemporary era e-books had been gaining popularity with the advanced technology, whereas the used of published book is decreasing. Although some individuals praise it and others still gossip about it. Here this essay is going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages associated with this trend. Firstly, there are many advantages of e-books. On the one hand, it is very light and convenient to carry at any places in the form of electronic devices such as iPad, mobile phones, laptops. On the other hand, they can lift their entire library with them wherever they go. For instance, in the recent times, more than half of the university students prefer e-books in their studies as they can carry arrays of information in a single device instead of huge hardcover books and notebooks. Secondly, there are disadvantages too. By spending a lot of time in e-books, people are having problems with eyesight because of the blue light from the screens. Individual often have an irritation and stress too. For example, in the present scenario people often visit doctors because of this issue. Therefore, we need to take a precaution while reading e-books on their gadgets. So, it is safe to relay on the printed book rather than e-books. To sum up, the main benefit of e-book is that it is easy to carry a bulk of files in a small hand. Despite the advantage of this shift, it has a drawback of affecting the health of an individual. Thus, we should analyse these things and utilise the trend.
In this contemporary era e-books had been gaining popularity with the advanced technology, whereas the
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used
of published book is decreasing. Although
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some
individuals praise it
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and others
still
gossip about it. Here this essay is going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages associated with this trend.

Firstly
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
advantages of e-books. On the one hand, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
light and convenient to carry at any places in the form of electronic devices such as iPad, mobile phones, laptops.
On the other hand
, they can lift their entire library with them wherever they go.
For instance
, in the recent times, more than half of the university students prefer e-books in their studies as they can carry arrays of information in a single device
instead
of huge hardcover books and notebooks.

Secondly
, there are disadvantages too. By spending
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a lot of
time in e-books,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are having problems with eyesight
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the blue light from the screens. Individual
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
have an irritation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
too.
For example
, in the present scenario
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people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
visit doctors
because of this
issue.
Therefore
, we need to take a precaution while reading e-books on their gadgets.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it is safe to relay on the printed book
rather
than e-books.

To sum up, the main benefit of e-book is that it is easy to carry a bulk of files in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
hand. Despite the advantage of this shift, it has a drawback of affecting the health of an individual.
Thus
, we should
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analyse
these things and
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utilise
the trend.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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